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Bougie Hippie's avatar

I must buy that butterscotch shampoo so they can miss me as much. You keep hittin that spot Anomie. Fucking takes one to know one. โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿงจ

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Ooooh compliment indeed from you, my Queen. Iโ€™ll link the shampoo! ๐Ÿ˜˜

Chris Keller's avatar

that line got me as well.

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Kiwiโ€™s Stories's avatar

I donโ€™t know how to quite describe this, but the teasing, taunting, innocent and flirty character I love!! She was alive in my head for moment, amazingly well done ๐Ÿ˜ฎโ€๐Ÿ’จ

Anomie's avatar

Aww thanks beautiful. This was a fun write! โค๏ธ

K. Tooley's avatar

Seadh... dh'ionndrainn mi thu, ceart gu leรฒr. ๐Ÿ˜ Tha feum agam air fras fuar a-nis.๐Ÿ”ฅ

Anomie's avatar

An aire, cha bu mhath leat cnatan a ghlacadh. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Steve Baker's avatar

๐Ÿ’ซ๐Ÿ˜‰

Steve Baker's avatar

Dear Anomie,

Holy hell ... you came in swinging again, full voltage.

Swagger, venom, velvet, and that hurricaneโ€‘inโ€‘heels persona you wield like a weapon.

A fullโ€‘blown haunting ... leather, laments, and that Fifeโ€‘born trouble you sling like a charm.

Talented doesnโ€™t even cover it.

You write like youโ€™re cracking open my ribcage and rummaging around for the ember ...

the kind of talented that makes a man check the sky twice before stepping outside.

Missed you?

Letโ€™s just say the Bothy feels louder when youโ€™re in it.

A wild flame kens its own kind ...

and once itโ€™s licked your bones,

youโ€™ll never be fully cold again.

Steve

Ichor and Embers's avatar

โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ”ฅ

Anomie's avatar

๐Ÿ˜˜

Crystal Cunningham MD's avatar

Tongue tie my hubba-hubba.

This is fun I picture for some reason, your head has to bob up and down to the syllables in hubba.

Anomie's avatar

This comment triggered the sleaziest laugh. ๐Ÿคฃ

Siddhartha Mukherjee's avatar

"Psst...

Missed me?"

That recurring line

becomes

less a refrain

and more

an obsession

knocking

at the door.

The voice

is impossible

to ignore.

Intense. Unflinching. Memorable. I'M SUBSCRIBING!

I write at The Reflective State, where one of my ongoing series is Mountain Mysteriesโ€”atmospheric tales of mystery, folklore and the unexplained set in the mountains of India. If curiosity ever brings you my way, I'd genuinely love to know what you think.

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Thank you Siddhartha โค๏ธโค๏ธ

M.L. Allen's avatar

I'm just. I mean. I'd miss you. Be damn stupid if I didn't. You're a...hot, sassy, beautiful, sweet badass. Damn my friend. That was good. ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿฅต

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Youโ€™re too kind my friend, but Iโ€™m sure glad you enjoyed it ๐Ÿ˜˜

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Doug Bristol's avatar

Love it!

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Thanks Doug ๐Ÿ˜˜

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You better have!

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Anomie's avatar

Thank you love. I just about made it ๐Ÿคฃ